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帖子  祝玥❤1048508 周二 十月 09, 2012 8:00 am

Oh love

There are times when I just want to look at your face
With the stars in the night
There are times when I just want to feel your embrace
In the cold night
There are times when I just watch all the stars that fall down
Wishing you will be mine

Maybe it's intuition
But some things you just don't question
Like in your eyes
I see my future in an instant
And there it goes
I know that it might sound more than a little crazy
But I believe

If you're not the one
then why does my soul feel glad today?
If you're not the one
then why does my hand fit yours this way?
If I don't need you
then why does your name resound in my head?
If you're not for me
then why does this distance maim my life?

And I hope you are the one I share my life with
And I wish that you could be the one I die with
And I'm praying you're the one I build my home with

I’m restless
Till I rest in you

So I vow
I'd rather have bad times with you,
than good times with someone else
I'd rather be beside you in a storm
than safe and warm by myself
I'd rather have hard times together
than to have it easy apart

Someday when we’re older
and our skin is worn and both our hair is gray
We won’t cry when it’s our time to leaves this life behind
And I will fly with you for beyond the moon
I will spend my whole life through
Falling more in love with you


tongue Mr. Li, it is really an awkward assignment for me.
Crying or Very sad Because i'm single.
Rolling Eyes Imagining a person and writing a love poem for him is very strange.
pig Are you intended to encourage all of us to find a lover right now? lol!

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帖子  黄晓娟 周二 十月 09, 2012 4:22 pm

我在想大白老师会怎样回复你~~嘿嘿

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帖子  Admin 周三 十月 10, 2012 3:58 pm

Well, I hope you can find your love, not lover. lol!

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帖子  祝玥❤1048508 周四 十月 11, 2012 4:53 pm

Admin 写道:Well, I hope you can find your love, not lover. lol!
我想说我没有能够理解三行情诗的意思。。。所以我现在重新写一个。。。。 jocolor
i'm restless
till i rest in you
let me rest in you
这样应该符合要求了吧。。。 elephant
不够我就再吧我的长诗拆一拆。。。 bounce

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帖子  祝玥❤1048508 周四 十月 11, 2012 4:54 pm

黄晓娟 写道:我在想大白老师会怎样回复你~~嘿嘿

cyclops 你楼下就是。。。
sunny 哪天能见证你fall in love的全过程就好了

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帖子  彭倩 周四 十月 11, 2012 5:49 pm

嘿嘿 哈哈

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帖子  祝玥❤1048508 周四 十月 11, 2012 5:52 pm

彭倩 写道:嘿嘿 哈哈

Embarassed 乃笑的我有点紧张。。。

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帖子  黄晓娟 周四 十月 11, 2012 6:00 pm

祝玥❤️1048508 写道:
黄晓娟 写道:我在想大白老师会怎样回复你~~嘿嘿

cyclops 你楼下就是。。。
sunny 哪天能见证你fall in love的全过程就好了
额,嘿嘿~~这有点儿难度~~~不过感觉你写的很像一首的歌词哦!! Smile

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帖子  祝玥❤1048508 周六 十月 13, 2012 5:46 am

黄晓娟 写道:
祝玥❤️1048508 写道:
黄晓娟 写道:我在想大白老师会怎样回复你~~嘿嘿

cyclops 你楼下就是。。。
sunny 哪天能见证你fall in love的全过程就好了
额,嘿嘿~~这有点儿难度~~~不过感觉你写的很像一首的歌词哦!! Smile

tongue 怎么有难度啦 你要求太高看不上男孩纸啊 Razz 不过现在只有慢慢等啦
rabbit 哦?歌词?下次你悄悄告诉我你觉得是哪首歌的歌词好不,悄悄地哈 bounce

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