me in the eyes of other people

Me in the eyes of other people
Now, I am the junior student. I live in Nanjing three years,and I have many good friends.Sometimes I think about the other people’s thoughts.What am I in the eyes of other people?
First,I think I am an optimistic girl.In this aspect,I think the other people should agree with me.I always make humorous atmosphere,I always take happiness to others.When I play with friends,they often said me that is an optimistic girl.
Second,other people think me that is an enthusiastic person.I always help other people.I think this can help many people.Maybe someday,I have troubles,I will hope someone will help me.You image that nobody would help you,how the world will be? Therefore,I like helping others.
Maybe,I have many advantages,but I also have disadvantages.
The disadvantage which affects my life the most is selfabased.I often think I am the worst.Sometimes,I can’t finish the work,I will think I’m bad.Sometimes,I can’t understand teachers’words,I will be sad,I will think everyone would better than me.I am afraid of losing face.I think if you don’t understand teachers’ words, you will be disgraced.So, I am selfabased.It affects my life.
Besides be selfabased,I’m also selfconceit.Sometimes,I think I’’m the best.I always think I can do everything.I don’t think that the other people are better than me.I believe that I can do many difficult things that the others can’t .
Maybe,I have many advantages in the others’eyes,but I also have disadvantages.I am an optimistic, enthusiastic girl,and also I am selfabased and selfconceit person.











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