Me in the eyes of other people

Me in the eyes of other people 陈淳
Everybody has specific attribute or quality distinguish me from anyone else
Me in the eyes of my parents. I should be forever a child. They has tag phrase is “You just like a child” Such as sometime I do something play a very easy game or eat min biscuits. In the eyes of my father. He thinks I am a lazy girl. In the vacation, I like to sleep late everyday often skip breakfast altogether. My father think I should gets up early like diligent student, but I always mumbled that I did not want to get up yet. By the way, after dinner my father wants to go for a walk and ask me “Do you feel like a walk?” and I relaxed in a sofa and say “No”. However me in the eyes of my mother. I am toughly and virtuous. I am a aerobic athletes, do aerobic exercises for six years. Great number of exercise made me extremely exhausted every day, but I never tell my parents I want give up and my mother encouraged me and insisted that I kept at it. I should succeed my tears and sweats spent on aerobic are all in my mother’s eyes.
Me in eyes of my friends. I am a active and out-going have good friendship. They all like play with me. In friends’ eyes I have a tag label that is “Green”. Because I like green very much. All my things are green. And my character trait is like green. Green is represent vitality.

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