Me in the eyes of other people 1048617 李哲恒

Me in the eyes of other people
As a kind of human nature, knowing about ourselves is a philosophical problem. Different people indicate diverse images for the relationship between you, which the answer might deeply astonish you. So many versions are held by my friends who accompanied me in each period of time. Since the impressions are so colorful and unique, what are my personal edition?
Friends are distinguished by the common ground among us.
First, my buddies’ opinions to me would be a guy who looks quiet, cold or even dull outside, but inside he is volatile and charismatic. Because we have undergone so many indelible episodes during our friendship journey. Evil or good things are all involved in our experiences. As a boy, such as naughty and rashness are nature labels in adolescence. So the definition means that troubles, which are doomed, would revolve around us. To my middle school friends Liu, both of us indulge in chemical experiments. What we enjoyed most in school was the moment we mixed various chemical reagents in test tube or flask. The mysterious reactions reflect tantalizing charm that drive us so hard even a cloud on the horizon. The impression in his mind are supposed to be crazy or related description.
Then , my colleagues who have same enthusiasm upon hobby must consider me as a maniac. When I choose companions who could pursue the professional level companying with me, my generousness would turn around to a illiberal character. I hate failure , hence, I would rather train with a pure hobby friend. When a inevitable competition occurs to us, we could just contend with each other without superfluous hesitation. Just like my badminton career, I think playing with people known not so long will do more benefits to your skill. Therefore we have no more common ground, so that sharing the happiness of interest occupies a commanding position.
And in the teachers’ eyes, they regard me as a credible monitor who can be a communicative bridge. Tasks that have been added into my schedule are destined to be accomplished. The key to my work is responsibility, which leads to my precise attitude towards no matter what kind of assignments.
Different features structure my pro and con. Which one is the real one? You should analyze the problem by youself.

词汇基础扎实，句法知识也不错，有长短句的变化，请继续努力；但文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。一些具体的语言或表达错误如下，Friends are distinguished by the common ground among us. (这句话没太看明白，放在这感觉也比较突兀，请考虑下)，First, my buddies' opinions to me would be a guy who looks quiet, cold or even dull outside, but inside he is volatile and charismatic. (平行结构前后不一致，but后面应该也是跟a guy who...相一致的)，Evil or good things are all involved in our experiences. (貌似没有这样的表达方式，另外evil的使用肯定不合适，There were moments of joy as well as sorrow.) So the definition means that troubles, which are doomed, would revolve around us. (这句话没看明白)，To my middle school friends Liu, (基本语法错误)，who have same enthusiasm upon (the same)，my generousness would turn around to a illiberal character (turn around to可以改为shift to或者switch to)，Different features structure my pro and con.(这句话想表达的意思不清楚，pros and cons更适用于一件事的正反两面，人的话倒不如直接用strengths and weaknesses)。