Me in the eyes of other people 1048409贾芳怡
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Me in the eyes of other people 1048409贾芳怡
Me in the eyes of other people
There is a legend that a black rose growing in frozen and snow-covered land can realize one’s three wishes. However, only the one with true love can find it. Anyone who heads to there is freezing to death. No one succeed.
Living in a world of bird’s twitter and fragrant of flowers, a boy promises his girl to fetch the beauteous and arrogant black rose. Actually the girl plants a garden of white roses, pure and flawless. The girl beg him not leave her for fear that he would never return. Regardless the girl’s entreat, the boy determines to follow his heart and find the black rose for the girl.
For a long time, the girl doesn’t hear anything about the boy. She fastens yellow ribbons on the window waiting for the boy all day long. One day, she is bad-ill, struggling to crawl to the white roses. Smelling the aroma of white rose, lucid tears run down from her rosy cheeks. The tears turn to scarlet and flow to the pure and flawless white roses.
Instantaneously, boy feels a sharp pain in his chest. He feels tired without finding the black rose and recollects happy days he spend with his baby girl. He decides to go back home because the girl is the black rose in his heart. Living a beatific life with her is the boy’s ultimate wish.
Nevertheless, when seeing the yellow ribbons swing in the wind, his heart punches heavily. Does anything wrong with the girl? Hardly when he saw the girl with white gown lying in the garden, had he caught sight of a black rose beside her. The black and arrogant rose. It is too late to realize that the girl is the exact black rose.
Dear readers, guess what? I am the black rose as well as true love.
You can only see me until you lost someone you really love.
wug7d贾芳怡- 帖子数 : 7
注册日期 : 12-09-04
回复: Me in the eyes of other people 1048409贾芳怡
总算有人写不一样的文体了,不过总感觉和题目略微有点偏差,还有我的智商和情商可能比较低,故事没太看懂,比如那个男的为什么要去找黑玫瑰,不知道yellow ribbon是不是借用了Tie a Yellow Ribbon Round the Old Oak Tree呢?He decides to go back home because the girl is the black rose in his heart. 为啥啊? He caught sight of a black rose beside her. 不是可以实现三个愿望吗,直接原地满血满状态复活不就行了 语法嘛,注意时态,动词介词搭配以及不定式的用法。
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