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帖子  宋阳1248518 周一 十月 20, 2014 1:59 pm

Nanjing and Luoyang are two cities with both similarities and differences. They are two of the Four Great Ancient Capitals of China with a long history of civilization and glorious city construction. Therefore, both of them have a rich tourism resource. It is known that they are famous for their city flowers, plum blossom of Nanjing and peony of Luoyang. However, they have various differences as well. Nanjing is the capital of Jiangsu province located in the lower Yangzte River. It has long been a national center of economy, education, research, transport networks and tourism, holding an important status in China. The summer is very hot and muggy while the winter is cold and damp, and in between, spring and autumn are of reasonable length. In comparison with Nanjing, Luoyang is a prefecture-level city in western Henan province of Central China. As its name states, the Old Town of Luoyang is located on the north bank of Luo River, a southern tributary of the middle reaches of the Yellow River.The history of Luoyang is brilliant and it is one of the cradles of Chinese civilization. The four seasons are distinct here and the climate is more comfortable than that of Nanjing.

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帖子  Admin 周六 十一月 01, 2014 8:59 pm

Nanjing and Luoyang are two cities with both similarities and differences.那也可以试试Nanjing and Luoyang are like identical twins with different character. 这里They are two of the Four Great Ancient Capitals of China,换成both ...然后变成插入语加在第一句话里。It is known that they are famous for their city flowers, plum blossom of Nanjing and peony of Luoyang. 这句话如果是相同点应该表达什么呢?前面一句话是讲旅游,突然跳到市花好像有点突然了。 However, they have various differences as well. 可以说Their differences are distinctive in that ... 最后,比较两个城市的不同,南京又提到旅游,洛阳又提到历史,这个和相同点里已经重复了,所以请多加注意。

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