1248718姜涛第四次作业

Urban Life and Rural life
The past childhood of mine has experienced rural life, since I was brought up by my grandparents in the countryside. Then I moved into urban area after I graduated from my middle school. Indeed, there are many differences between urban life and rural life, especially from following aspects.
Form the perspective of living environment, urban areas are much polluted, particularly in the quality of air. Tall building found everywhere make people feel stressful and hardly breathing. On the contrary, living in rural areas has a broad view of rurality. People can easily regulate their moods whenever they get into troubles for all fresh things here. Another difference comes to life style. People living in cities almost office workers, they lead a regular life – 8 work hours a day ,keeping quick pace in their daily life and continuously feel much pressure on them. Just capturing this character of urban life, many recreational industries are found and flourish. People are willing to pay more on improving their living standard. While in rural areas, people have a simple but free life, usually they work a whole day to cultivate emblements. So just a few entertainments are set up here, nevertheless, people feel relaxed and seldom exhausted from their work.
One more distinct aspect lies in transportation. In the cities, wide roads are cross each other, super ways and highways come into being to adorn the transportation. But there still lots of traffic jams because of large population. Cars and buses are major vehicles, almost families have their own private cars. In rural areas, muddy roads shuttle between villages. Few traffic problems occur here. Until now, many houses still hold bullock-cart to carry goods. Besides, small trucks also contributed to deliver things. However, the obvious drawback lies in education. In rural areas, low level of teaching facilities and faculties make it a tendency for teenagers to move into cities for higher education.
From my point of view, though urban life is more colorful and many graduates choose to stay in cities for higher living standard. However, I prefer living in the countryside simply because I want to live lightheartedly and lead a steady life.

觉得开头应该是sb experience sth 而不是 my childhood experience sth;另外应该是in ××× aspects,不是from…比较的点可能少了点，但说得还是蛮清楚的…