1248703 李依诺 第四次作业

With the development of modernization, more and more differences between urban life and rural life emerge.
Firstly, there are different in the environment. The urban areas are full of skyscrapers and vehicles. They make the cities modern and busy. Most of time, urban dwellers hear the noise of the transportation and see the brightness of the illumination even in midnight. On the contrary, the rural areas are embraced by plants which make the countryside natural and quiet. The air is clearer and healthier.
Secondly, residents in the two areas live in distinct conditions. The urban areas are crowded, people rush to cities to seek for better life. The cities are getting narrow on account of the large population. At the same time, the pressure from work and life is serious, which make the residents tense. In contrast with urban life, rural life is much easier. There are less people live in wilder lands. They work for themselves in a free and peaceful style. However, comparing with urban areas, rural areas are slowly-developing. Urban life is more convenient than rural life. it also have richer martial so that the living quality is relatively high.
The two areas both have their own characteristic; people can always choose places to settle based on their preferences.

there are different in the environment. 明显的病句啊。The urban areas are full of skyscrapers and vehicles. They make the cities modern and busy.两句合为一句，另外可以试试decorate with来表达，the rural areas are embraced by plants 这句还不错。The urban areas are crowded, people rush to cities to seek for better life. 两句话中间没有任何连接直接放在一起了，强调过好几次了。最后句式变化还有些欠缺，请继续努力。