1248707王崟池第四次作业

Urban Life and Rural Life
As the regard of the rapidly development of the economy and technology,many people come to the big cities to work and live in.But there are also a lot of people who inhabit in the village for years think they will never live in the cities,or the people who have been tired of the urban life are moving to the rural area.So,what are the differences between these two kinds of life?
For those who prefer living in big cities,they can emphasis a list of advantages of the urban area.Firstly,more chances are provided in the cities.Opportunities and challenges mean a lot to people who expect to more money and higher position.There is no doubt that only in the cities they can get those.Secondly,the transportation in the cities is more convenient.People can choose bus,metro or car to transport from homes to companies flexibly.And if they need to leave for other cities,they can also choose airplane,train or ship.Thirdly,people can be well-informed in the cities.Newspapers is sold everyday in the newsstand in the street corner;news programs are broadcasting everyday in every TV channel;and talking will contribute most during the information transiting.
However,for these who insist to live in the countryside,those advantages are not enough to change their attitude toward the awful life in the urban area.They can also list a lot of benefits that urban life can never give.For example,the fresh air.There are so many cars and high buildings that the air in the cities is becoming suffocating,which means the fresh air is more precious than in was before.What is more,in the rural area,people can have a big house with a garden and they can enjoy a peaceful and relaxing life with their garbage or have a wonderful talk with the nature.These people seldom think about the fashion.Even though the people live in the cities think it is inconvenient and tedious to live in the rural area,they have to admit that the rural live will make them relaxed.
In a short,to live in the urban area or the rural area is your own choice.The two kinds of lives both have advantages and disadvantages.As the saying goes,the one fits you is the best.

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