1248716 彭彩霞 第四次作业

Some people like living in the city while others prefer rural life.It is hard to judge which kind of life is the better.Each one has its own advantages and disadvantages.
In urban areas,there is better transportation service,education facilities and health care.People have lots of opportunities to come into contact with the newest high-tech products.City dwellers can find a great number of employment options.In addition,people can enjoy various entertainments in their leisure time.There are more cultural activities in the city.However,the city,despite all its good points,may be a place too crowded for people to live in.With the development of the city,urban citizens have to work hard and they are often under great pressure.Besides,they are worrying about many problems such as traffic jam,industrial pollution and crime.
Living in rural areas allows residents to keep close contact with nature more easily.People can breath fresh air and listen to the song of birds.They can enjoy the peace and calm of the pastoral environment.Furthermore,people can have more healthy diet because their food is grown by themselves.In rural areas,people exert less stress on themselves.What’s more,rural residents get along well with their neighbors.They have a close neighborhood relationship.Although there are many advantages of living in the countryside,rural inhabitants may also face some problems.For example,people can not get so many job opportunities.They may find it is inconvenient to commute from their home to their work place if their work in the downtown.

Some people like living in the city while others prefer rural life.稍微用点高级点的词汇，如obessed, bewitched, enchanted等等。there is better transportation service,education facilities and health care.并列用的不错，但前面谓语动词复数更合适。People have lots of opportunities to come into contact with the newest high-tech products.City dwellers can find a great number of employment options.这两句话之间总感觉没有衔接，跳跃的比较突然。能用urban citizens, city dwellers来避免重复还是很不错的。最后如果城市和乡村比较的点是对应的就好了，比如城市的人际关系，乡村的人际关系，前面讲了什么，后面也尽量与之对应。