1248616 周瑶 第四次作业

Differences between shopping online and offline world
Shopping online has playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits. Some people are crazy about shopping online,while others prefer to buy things in real life. Indeed,differences exist between these two ways.
As far as online shopping concerned, it is known for convenience. Shopping on the internet allows us to buy anything without going out. It brings lots of benefits for those busy people and they can purchase all things ranging from household electronic appliances to daily meals.Isn't it convenient?Compared with shopping in real life,another advantage is that the commodity is cheaper.Moreover,demand will exceed supply when thousands of online shops cut down the prices on the 11th of November.
For most people,shopping offline is indispensable. With shopping in real life,we can assure the quality,justify the real color and know whether it fits us or not. However,shopping online can’t reach this requirement. Long before, a failure online makes me heartbroken, just because the color differs from the picture's .In addition, we can enjoy the delightful process of hanging around in various shops,especially to those girls who loves shopping.Trying on and buying clothes satisfy their pursuit of beauty. In contrast,shopping online fores us staring at the screen so long that makes us uncomfortable.To some degree,too many choices online drive me crazy.I can’t justify which is better.
All in all, these two ways in shopping has their own features. After knowing of them, we can maximize favorable factors and minimize unfavorable ones. What’s more, we can combine these two sides.For example,if we want to buy clothes bearing famous brand,we can try it on in physical stores and then buy it on the internet,in most cases,it will cheaper. It will be wise for us to compare and act in a reasonable way when buying things.

Shopping online has playing 第一句话就出现时态错误了啊，,while others prefer to buy things in real life.这里的real life不准确，即使在网上买也是现实生活。As far as online shopping concerned, it is known for convenience. 这句话貌似用了两个单配，但实际是有点问题的，可以说Online shopping is becoming increasingly popular thanks to/due to its convenience. 下面Shopping on the internet用的很好，避免了online shopping的一个重复。Isn't it convenient?如果是议论文，尽量避免使用反问句啊。another advantage is that the commodity is cheaper.这句话少东西哦。However,shopping online can’t reach this requirement.可以改为which online shopping cannot offer. 这个题目我们以前说过，而且网上应该有很多例文，建议再去百度文库搜一下，自己对照参考一下。