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帖子  yangpapapapa 周日 十月 19, 2014 1:50 pm

One season VS. Four seasons
Many people prefer to stay at a place with the same season while certain people appreciate living in the area with four distinctive seasons. It’s hard to conclude which state is much better because beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
One season is convenient for people to adapt to the local peripheral environment. Many seasonal illnesses such as flu may be reduced dramatically. And girls needn’t worry about which clothes she need to match with the season. However, if you abruptly change your living place you may suffer from habitual problems, which means you lack the ability to be used to the new environment compared those living with four seasons. Comparatively, people accompanied by four seasons have more possibility to be exposed to various seasonal illnesses, but for which people can attain the potent immune system. The ability to adapt to different environments will be correspondingly improved. Moreover, girls prefer beauty have more choices to select clothes and show the personality.
One season means the living style is also sole. If you love the simple living way you can enjoy the environment. Walking on the street, you will find the atmosphere everywhere is about the same season. Shopping in the supermarket, you will find the food you want to buy has been bought so many times. Maybe there is much foreign food, after all, it is counter-season food which is not healthy enough. Comparatively, four seasons contain more colorful life styles relatively. In summer you go swimming while in winter you go skiing. With the change of season, you feel the trees alongside the streets experience circulation of the life, and you tastes a great variety of food and drinks with high nutrition.
Nevertheless, as the global warming deteriorates many areas on the earth go to the extremes that only winter and summer remain while spring and autumn slowly die away. Whatever environment we live in, the outermost thing we consider first is to protect it. Or my topic one day will be about one season and two seasons.



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帖子  Admin 周日 十月 19, 2014 2:46 pm

One season VS. Four seasons这个意思都能明白,但是有没有这种只有一个季节的说法呢?或者是stable climate? And girls needn’t worry about which clothes she need to match with the season. 两个need有点重复了。 people accompanied by four seasons have more possibility to 这里可以试试are more likely to ... 或者Chances are that ...
One season means the living style is also sole. 这里sole虽然有单一的意思,但是基本不做表语使用,可以试试tedious. 对比的选择还是比较新颖的,如果再具体到两个有代表性的城市可能会更好些,这样相对容易去比较。

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