1248715 郭玮 第四次作业

   I recognize there are many differences between my high school life and college life after I have been living in the university for two years.
   When I was a high school student, study was the centre of my life. In high school, we were required to follow our teachers’ steps and finish their assignments every day. I hardly had spare time to get some rest and do some entertainments. It seems that if I don’t use these times to study, I will waste my life. While the college life is more free. At the very beginning, I was perplexed because there was a lot of spare time in my hand. Fewer courses and less homework help me find my leisure time that I have lost. Besides, falling in love with someone was banned in high schools. Puppy love was considered as a kind of poison, which predicted that we would be doomed to failure. In contrast, college brings the first sweet taste of love. Lots of my friends find their soul mates in their universities. Finally, another obvious difference is that I didn’t have much pocket money when I was a high school student. I couldn’t buy things that I liked but expansive without my parents’ permission. After I enrolled in the university, I receive steady living expenses every month. I can buy things that I want and save money for trips.
   Although my college life is more free and relaxing, I prefer my high school life, because I love the feeling that pursuing my dream and enjoy the happiness when I achieve my goals.

I recognize there are many differences between ... 如果用not ... until ... 可能会更好些，或者用since来替换after。I hardly had spare time to get some rest and do some entertainments. 用介词for代替动词会显得更简练，time for more rest and entertainment。It seems that if I don’t use these times to study, I will waste my life. 时态seemed，time不可数，这句话本身也有些问题，意思能理解，但是能不能换种更地道的表达，请考虑下。 there was a lot of spare time in my hand.可以试试at my own disposal。college brings the first sweet taste of love这句话还是不错的，

我觉得总体很流畅，全面的写出了大学与高中的区别。