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Go for further education or not
It’s a busy season for juniors, they all believe that a better choice leads a better life. Thousands of juniors are working hard as busy as bees, for they are looking forward to a bright future. It is nothing new to see the scene that the library is full of juniors who have made up their mind going for further education, and the classroom fills up with juniors who are going to find a good job attending lectures given by all walks of companies. Whatsoever, they are fighting for their future.
But as a junior student, I haven’t made my decision yet. Therefore, surfing on the internet is inescapable. And there answer comes.
To get a good job, there are few requirements to reach. firstly, it is important to prepare for the final examination, so that I could get a good graduation results; secondly, switching my learning method, and the emphasis has to be put on practical use., finally, developing my social communicating skill, which is, in my opinion, the most important one. In addition, attending lectures given by companies is inevitable.
To go for further education, it is another challenge for me. That means the library will be the second home of mine. But before this fighting begins, it is the process of choosing majors and schools that bothered me. And it is said that only if I put all my strength into it can I make it possible. There is still a long way to go on the way to success…
Weight the advantages and disadvantages, I finally made my decision: go for further education.

a better choice leads a better life这里是leads to，另外就是choice的所指并不是很明确，所以放在这会造成一点困惑，到底是什么选择呢？who have made up their mind也可试试determine， Therefore, surfing on the internet is inescapable.逻辑上并不是很明确的因果关系吧，可能更偏中式的思维，另外inescapable指(of a fact or a situation) that you cannot avoid or ignore，比如an inescapable fact，这里请再考虑下。And there answer comes.应该是倒装结构，但前面并没出现问题，所以answer针对哪个也不是很清楚。我们要求写的是comparison and contrast，如果要明显对比的话，应该是着重写比如找工作的学生会干什么，对比准备考研的学生，这样结构安排和思路会更清楚些，请多加注意。