Me in the Eyes of Other People 1048412许俊

Me in the Eyes of Other People
I have often thought the question what kind of person I am. Someone says that I am earnest and easy-going. Someone says that I am indifferent to others sometimes. Someone also says other things about me. I can hardly define which one is the real me in that it is completely different to see myself from eyes of different people.
Me in the Eyes of teachers is hard-working and aspirant. Looking back the past few years, I am growing up with teachers’ praise. I always hand in neat and well-prepared homework on time everyday. I can solve a complex problem when others don’t know the answers. I am in the ranking top in the exams in many times. I also can do my best to finish after receiving tasks. Yes, I am very industrious and a standard of good students in the teacher’s mind.
In my parents’ eyes, I am naughty and self-willed. However mature and sophisticated I show outside, I am still a child who won’t grow up forever when I come back home. I will look at my father with a face of worship to look forward to listening to his stories. Sometimes when I came back home for holiday, I will ask my mothers to sleep with me. Even though she may snore so loudly that I can’t sleep, I like the feeling of being with her in that the time I stay at home is less and less. Sometimes I will lose my temper in front of them, actually I don’t want to hide my true feelings and would like to show the real one of myself.
I am an easy-going and trustworthy friend in the eyes of my friends. As a friend, I am eligible. I am accustomed to listening to everyone’s talking carefully, then smile in due time. If I encounter interesting topics and right people, I will talk with them off the reel and laugh happily. Frankly speaking, I try my best to treat others honestly, and at the same time, I would like to gain the same honest response. However, frank is not equal to treat nakedly. Actually, I also conceal something that I don’t want to share with others.
Through eyes of different people like teachers, parents and friends, I can see different aspects of myself, at the same time, I also find out something about myself they don’t know. As far as I am concerned, all that they see about me are the real me, but not the complete one. In fact, I don’t change but only in different forms.

文中连接词和过渡词稍欠丰富，内容基本连贯，行文稍欠流畅，文章用词不错，但是学术词汇不够丰富，建议平时多积累。文章开头显得有点啰嗦，主题不是很明确，没把切入点强化出来。语言比较直白，中式表达方式稍微多了一点，Sometimes when I came back home for holiday, I will ask my mothers to sleep with me. (这个歧义有点大…… )，总的来看句子变化较少，简单句比较多，语法方面还需要加强。