1248510 胡鸥 第四次作业

My Two Little Cousins
My two little cousins are twins, they are six years old now. Different from what we usually think the image of twins, they are totally distinctive.
The elder brother is an absolute naughty boy, always with big smile. what he apt to is throwing toys everywhere in the house and never putting them back, which makes his mother crazy. It is recognized in his family that he is a trouble maker. The clock, the remote control of TV, the sofa, even the door etc. have been damaged by him, when he makes troubles, there is no shame and apology in his heart, but *** a grimace. As for his good parts, the sunny smile is the most obvious label on him. There is on need for us to amuse him, but he always makes us laugh.
Compared with the elder, the little brother seems more quiet and obedient. Every minute he accompanys with his mother and he becomes a mother's helper. His obedency reflects in *** things order, putting toys back and asking for mother's advice before doing something, which makes his mother feel warm. What he interests in is reading and watching animations, when he does these, he is absolute quiet.
One is trouble maker, the other is mother's helper, but both of them are regarded as the angel in the family.

这个对比的思路还是很好的，就是描写时没抓住一个重点，比如按照你的思路两个人，一个应该是naugty，一个是obedient，但smile和quiet就有点对不上了，所以只抓住一点就可以，最鲜明的。The elder brother is an absolute naughty boy，可以试试All of my relatives are unanimous that ... 或者 There is no doubt that，或者It is widely acknowledged that。what he apt to is throwing toys everywhere in the house 可以试试scatter这个词，have been damaged by him，可以试试survive，Every minute he accompanys with his mother and he becomes a mother's helper.这句话和主题关系不是很密切，asking for mother's advice，应该是permission吧，which makes his mother feel warm这个表达好像也有点问题，请再仔细考虑下。