1248604 王尘逸 第四次作业

Urban life and rural life

Nowadays, many young people who grew up in the countryside have been attracted to work and live in the city. However, there are some city residents who prefer the rural lifestyle, thinking that living in the countryside will be more relaxing and interesting.
As far as I’m concerned, it is hard to say which one is better, for both of them have advantages and disadvantages.
Living in the big city, people can receive better education, enjoy better facilities and more varied amusement compared living in the countryside. However, problems also can be found in the city, such as traffic jam, overpopulation and great pressure. And it’s difficult for many people to own a house in a big city as the price is too high to afford.
Rural life is quite different, there are less noise and pollution. You can enjoy the fresher air, the cleaner river and the beautiful scenery of the nature. The relationship between residents always much closer because of the lesser population. What’s more, the cost of living is general lower. Even so, many people leave their hometown for city in order to find good jobs, earn more money and seek for a more convenient and modern life.

除了attract以外，也可以试试其它表示吸引的词，比如allure, tempt, seduce等等。people can receive better education, enjoy better facilities总感觉后面应该还有一个动宾短语吧，这样好像才完整些，只有两个总觉得少了点什么。as the price is too high to afford.房价上涨也可以试试rocket或者soar，Rural life is quite different, 前面应该加上表示转折的连接词，这样会更连贯，也能显出前后对比。The relationship between residents always much closer，这里没有谓语动词。the cost of living is general lower.这里general可能不太合适，用relatively是不是会好一些呢？