1248603 秦凯第四次作业

1248603秦凯周六十月 18, 2014 7:48 am

Nowadays, with the arrival of twenty-one century, education is becoming more and more significant in our society. Hit with this trend, some students come to contend that studying abroad after undergraduate studies can provide them with a better studying phenomenon. But their viewpoint could not arouse any echo in my mind.
Generally speaking, whether we should study abroad depends on our families and ourselves. On the one hand, studying abroad can Borden our horizon, and allow us to contact different cultures and livings. Besides, it can influence our long-life on the development of your character and dealing with common things. However, it may cause a heavy burden on our family. On the other hand, indeed it can save us a lot of money when we study in our own country, especially for those poor families. And studying in a famous university in our own country is better than in a diploma mill in foreign countries. But the disadvantage is that we cannot contact the foreign culture.
In conclusion, as a famous saying goes, think before you leap, can studying abroad, after the end of undergraduate studying, bring us high reward after paying for so immense cost, every one of us is supposed to have a careful consideration.

**Admin** 周六十月 18, 2014 9:39 am

twenty-one century,first不是one啊，实在叫不准就用数字21st，还有就是现在已经2014年了，早就到21世纪了，再用with the arrival有点不合时宜了。can provide them with a better studying phenomenon.这句话没看明白，求解释。Borden our horizon这里是broaden，注意用词，contact different cultures and livings，contact换成experience或者用expose to这样的表达，后面的livings是什么意思，不是很清楚。 dealing with common things指什么？没有这样的表达吧，这次的段落写作问题很多，包括用词，句法等等，今后请多加注意。

123 周二十月 21, 2014 3:07 am

can provide them with a better studying phenomenon是说能提供给他们更好的学习环境（比在国内）
contact different cultures and livings 接触到不同的文化及生存方式
dealing with common things处理平常的事情

1248603 秦凯第四次作业