1248708程璐第四次作业

Where do you want to settle down in future? I dropped into a deep consideration when I got this question from my friends.
As for me, it is hard to make a decision at now. After all,both urban life and rural life have it’s own merits. Metropolis can provide people a high-level living guarantee. Initially,varied life-style bring along a colorful life. That is the source of happiness for me. Next,children could have chances to get to a superior education and obtain the development in an all-round way. Besides,the wholesome medical treatment system are also attractive. Unfortunately,every area is crowed in city. Traffic jam,air pollution,high life pressure,and complicated interpersonal relationship. All of those scared me off it. Speaking of these,I prefer to live in a small town or a village for a healthier life. I will lose myself in the beautiful scenery composed by fresh air,blue shy,crystalline rivulet,lined poplar and willow, and kind neighbors. It is obvious that rural life is easier and cozier than urban life with a view of the living environment.
In fact, I intend to go through both wonderful and colorful lives. Perhaps,in future, I would choose city as my working ground,and settle down in a little town after retirement. That is a perfect plan for me indeed .

Metropolis can provide people a high-level living guarantee. 这里provide应该搭配with，或者换成offer，Initially,varied life-style bring along a colorful life.这个和前面一句联系是什么呢？children could have chances to get to a superior education and obtain the development in an all-round way.这句话意思能明白，表达似乎有点问题，could have可以换成enjoy，superior有点不合适，换成better，obtain the development貌似没见过这种表达。还有就是后面基本都是短句或者不完整的句子，在正式写作请务必多加注意。