1248608 李梦如 第四次作业

The urban life and the rural life
   It is a common phenomenon that more and more rural migrant workers swarm into the city and settle down here, while some people choose to remove to suburbs. I guess that it mainly caused by the difference between urban life and rural life on living environments and quality of life.

   No doubt, what attracts people to live in country is the peaceful environment and fresh air. Urban life is always full of hustle and bustle and wherever we go, a sea of people and cars around you, which makes you upset and miserable. With the increase of private cars, the air pollution is becoming another problem that threatens public health. In contrary, living in a quiet environment can relax not only our minds but our bodies.

   In other spheres, cities can provide more chance for those young people and people in town can enjoy the conveniences of hospitals , schools , entertainment venues, and modern transport. However, though the rural life is healthful and quiet, it is simple and dull because of the clogged traffic. The lack of money may let people live in a lower lever ; the lack of cultural life would make people’s spirit vacant.

   People all have their own choice to live in city or in country and both urban life and rural life have their advantages and shortcomings.

It is a common phenomenon总觉得有点奇怪，可以试试It is nothing new或者We are familiar with the scene that ...，能用到我们讲过的swarm into这个表达还是很不错的，其实这里是一个对比，一方面是人们从乡村去城市，一个是从城市到农村，所以应该对比更鲜明些， migrant workers leave their peaceful farmland for the flourishing city while urban residents flee from the bustle of metroplis to the tranquil countryside. 下段的attract用的不错，中间两段的顺序要换一下，因为要根据第一段有个先后的次序。