1048319张力夫

As Nietzsche said, there haven't two leaves which are the same in the world. So do we ,humans. There haven't two people who are the same in the world, We are absolutely different with each other. But what I emphasize is that we may be even different of ourselves in the eyes of others. Please clam down, in fact, what I said is really exiting in daily life.
At least, me in the eyes of others is completely different. Many friends of mine would like to describe me as an outgoing and easy-going guy. However, in my spare time, when I stay along with myself, peace will be the theme around my surroundings. I prefer peace to bustle. I would like thinking in such atmosphere. I would like reading in such atmosphere. Peace help me keep balance with my body and my mind. That balance makes me think as a hobby and think more deeply, that level of thinking help me acknowledge our ambitions and life. That balance makes me communicate with authors in their spirit world. Peace and bustle are just like day and night, sunshine and moonlight of myself.
In my friend's mind, basketball is believed to be one part of my life. I enjoy running, jumping and shooting on the ball park. What is more enjoyable is that teamwork with my teammates, my friends. I can not deny that I love basketball to the death. But my friends can never image that when I am alone, I used to lie on the water of pool. It is not the form of exciting swimming. It's a relief of your body and your mind.
That's just me! Big difference from me in the eyes of others.

文章内容基本连贯，但行文不够流畅；能使用一些结构简单的长句，但是不能够熟练运用，连接词和过渡词以及学术词汇不够丰富，建议平时多积累。整篇文章有语病的句子过多，几乎每个句子都有问题，这里就不一一进行评述了。建议平时还应当在语法上多下功夫，记单词要有语境，至少记一到两个例句，写作要更力求严谨。