me in th eyes of others

Me in the eyes of other people
What am I look like in the eyes of other people? this is a question which I never think about, if not for this composition, now instead of sit here squeeze my miserable brain , I would watch a film with a cup of coffee in my hand! Through a long period of thinking, my answer is that a thousand people would look at me with a thousand different views.
First, let's start from my appearance. I am a girl with a normal height, very thin, long and straight hair, wearing a pair of glasses, always dress properly. This kind of outlook successfully made people think that I am a quiet and normal girl , which was turned to be true. I don't talk too much , and when I did , only several people around me can hear. These are the general impression that I left to people.
Then we need to talk about details. In the eyes of my parents, I am a little girl that never grow up, whenever I step out of our house, they would worry about my safety, my breakfast and so on. At home, I tried my best to be a worthy daughter, obey these rules, although sometimes became a lazy girl, always feel sleepy and eat junk food from time to time. In the eyes of my brother, I am a younger sister needed his protection, the most happy thing is that he would buy me a pile of yummy food, although he never understand how could a girl like me eat that much. These are the impressions I left to my families.
In the eyes of teachers, I am a hardworking student with normal performance. I don't talk much in the classes, and I am always finish all the homeworks before deadlines. With friends , I am outgoing or not,It depend on the relationship between us. In front of the most closest friend, I am totally straightforward, sometimes even speak without thinking at all. We share happiness and sorrows, sometimes argue, but never bear in mind. I am so lucky to hold those friends in my life.
That's me in the eyes of other people.

文中连接词和过渡词稍欠丰富，内容基本连贯；文中的长短句搭配合理，能够使用一些从句，但有些句子略显口语化，学术词汇不够丰富，建议平时多积累。语法上和表达方式上的错误也有一些，如What am I look like ... ，instead of sit here，normal girl (应该是ordinary吧)，a thousand different views (中式表达习惯)，I don't talk too much , and when I did (时态不一致)，to be a worthy daughter (worthy这里不太合适吧)，normal performance (an average student?)，homeworks，It depend on (基本语法)，We share happiness and sorrows, sometimes argue, but never bear in mind. (we argue sometimes but we always make up或者see eye to eye sometimes) 。