第一次作业 1248601 药学二班 陈姝丹

me in the eyes of other people
Although I have many personality traits, such as honesty, optimism, I’d rather think myself as a Gemini girl who is both active and peaceful. In other words, using my friends ’ words, I am like a running rabbit if active, but I will be a virgin if peaceful.
Speaking of my active character, I have many examples to prove it. Hanging out with my friends makes this character more obvious. I will be so active that I can not stay quiet even for a minute. It is so easy for me to talk or play with my friends for hours without a break. I will be so happy that i could not stop laughing, which, I hope, could bring happiness to others. I will be so energetic that I am ready to help everyone around me. All of those show my active character and most of my friends love it because they think young people should act like that.
Besides my active side, my peace is anther side of me which people comment on. Such as, I like to sit alone thinking of nothing. In this way, I feel comfortable and peaceful. I also love to smile and listen, surrounded by my friends or family, which makes me feel be loved. Besides, I can spend whole afternoon quietly doing my stuff. I can tell you so many thing about this side of me and it is very helpful for me to relax myself in a soft way.
In a word, I am both active and peaceful in the eyes of other people and that is truly who I am. Even though i have other characters which people may like or not, I am glad to have this special personality. this help me make many friends and i hope i can do better.

双子的两面性是不错的写作角度，鲜明的对比也是比较吸引人的一点，一些表达还请注意一下，请查阅一下such as的具体用法，文中有两处使用从语法角度看还是有问题的，a Gemini girl who is，这里的is也可以试试can be，they think young people should act like that.是个口语化的句子，请考虑换一种表达，Besides my active side, 因为只有对立的两种，所以这里besides还是有点不合适的，最后单词的拼写和大小写也务必多注意。