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Me in the eyes of other people
Everyone must have been wondered what he or she is in other people’s eyes. There is no exception for me. And here is the chance I get to know what people think of me.
I am always friendly to others according to my friends. The first impression I left on almost every friend of mine is that I am out-gonging and it is easy for them to get on well with me . Some of them regard me as a strong-minded and independent girl who can make firm determination in a short time and I am happy to be a reliable person in their eyes.
“You are always so careless and forgetful.” It was quite often for me to hear this sentence out of my mother’s mouth when I was a little girl. Now that I have grown up, such comments on longer come into my ears. But my mother still worries about me being reckless. In her eyes, I will be a child forever.
There are another group of people I cannot ignore. Where there is love, there is hate. Perhaps in the eyes of people who do not like me, I am a head-strong, impatient and irritable person. Well, that’s fine. Nobody is perfect. I know I could be shorttempered sometimes and I am trying to be more tolerant.
As the old saying goes,“There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes,” different people have different impressions on me. There is no need to change my own style in order to cater to everyone’s taste.The best way to be good is to be myself.

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