药学2班 1248613 孙佳星 修改版

Me in the eyes of other people
1248613 孙佳星
In different people’s eyes, I may be different.
One of my friends said that I may be cautious about unimportant things sometimes and that kind of unnecessary worries may make me face dilemmas.
One of my teachers said that I was sentimental and she worried that it may become a negative factor in my future.
And one of my elders said that I was diffidence and she always encourages me.
My father once said that my expressions are not very good sometimes although he may laugh at my terrible expressions especially in the morning.
In most of the roommates eyes, I am not very outgoing and not good at chatting or playing games. However, I can feel that they understand me and know what kind of person I am. Sometimes, they even help me when I was embarrassed.
Some of my classmates say that I am hardworking, cause I almost always stay at teaching building B all day and do not come back to our dormitory until very late. But I know the time wasted during some of the vacations and feel extremely regret. And I also know if I want to make my dream come true, I must study harder and harder.
Although every person has his or her strong points, he or she also has short points. I do want to give up my short points and change myself.
I will be more broad-minded and do not worried about trifles. I will improve myself and be more confident. I will be more optimistic and face my ambitions more courageously. I will be more outgoing and laugh more frequently. I will pay more attention on my study and save more time.
I do have changed myself. And I am changing myself.

这个……这好像是好多个句子被罗列在一起，但之间的联系似乎不够，不能构成一篇完整的文章或者段落，请今后在构思上多下功夫。表达方面，以第一人称"I"为主语的句子过多，另外类似于经常杞人忧天，我们可以用unwarranted anxiety或者favor fantasy over fact， a negative factor也就是我们说的weakness，或者a weak link，My father once said that my expressions are not very good sometimes although he may laugh at my terrible expressions especially in the morning.这个地方我不是很理解，求解释！In most of the roommates eyes, I am not very outgoing and not good at chatting or playing games. However, I can feel that they understand me and know what kind of person I am. Sometimes, they even help me when I was embarrassed. 这个句子间关系有些问题，请按逻辑进行调整下试试。