1248612 施琼华 第一次作业

Me in the eyes of other people
When people ask me to introduce myself.I always have the same introducing words, “I am a active girl, I am really a patient person and I like to make friends with everyone of your.” But that may not be what I am in other people’s eyes.
My parents always worry about my college life which I need to go far away from home. They think that is hard to me to take good care of myself, because I was so lazy to do the chores of the daily life. The fact is college life really have improved my independent ability. I am not the girl that rely on my parents to solute every problem for me. In my teachers’ eyes, maybe I am a quite silence girl. When I was in junior high school, one of my teacher once talked to me that she found I was too quiet to communicate with the other students in our class. Therefore, she asked the monitor to help me to make more friends with my classmates. Actually, on the contrary, in my friends’ eyes, I am never a quite person. They often hear me laugh loudly and sing happily. We can chat the whole night without rest. I like sharing my hobby or anther things with my friends. I once riding around a big lake and camping outside with my friends. They think my energy will never be run out.
There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people’s eyes. I am not the same people in different people’s eyes. Therefore, I just want to be a good myself pursue what I dream of. Moreover, I will also try my best to play my role in other people’s plays.

总体来看语法时态掌握还可以，但相对词汇和句式的变化就有些不足了，比如worry，我们可以使用concern，另外which I need to go far away from home.这里的which并不能表原因，应该替换为as，I was so lazy to do the chores，这个最起码应该是too...to的结构吧，maybe I am a quite silence girl，这里关于slient用来修饰人，If you describe someone as a silent person, you mean that they do not talk to people very much, and sometimes give the impression of being unfriendly.