1248718药学3班姜涛第一次作业

Me In The Eyes of Other people
It occurs to me every so often that what do my friends think of me? I was desperate to be given the answer every time I asked my friends the same question, since curiosity can easily take change of me.
Although I have got various answers, actually, they can be summarized in three aspects. Firstly, it seems a collective answer that I am not handsome enough for being a little fat, which embossed me a lot; Secondly, I am outgoing and easy-going at the most of time, especially in front of people about whom I know a lot, I seldom say a word facing strangers; Thirdly, being impetuous impress my friends z lot, just become of this trait, I am always *** lots of unexpected problems.
In a word, the evaluation of my friends can be a mirror for me to recognize myself I am so glad that bad habits can be reflected from mirror and I would get rid of them via my best trying.

reflect应该是这里面用的最好的一个词了，整体来看文章比较单薄，主体部分的每个小点基本只有一句话，没有任何的拓展和事实说明，这点在写作上是很忌讳的，即使我们的中心思想再好，观点再正确，没有去解释说明也很难为别人所接受，这一点请务必记住。

有点短，我建议要写长一些，首先可以在那body part的三点展开，多描述一下细节或者举个例子。