1248616周瑶第一次作业

Me in the eyes of other people
When I firstly entered my university, I had decided to perform well in every aspect. The reason why I did such was that I wanted to made a good impression on other people. In conclusion, I hoped I was labeled as a perfect or kind girl. I really hoped everything went well.
I know exactly what my advantages and deficiencies are. Therefore, I wanted to overcome my deficiencies. Firstly, maybe I am not as industrious as my roommates, and I tried to remind myself of being industrious. After a few days, they find the true me. Honestly, I really need to become laborious and say goodbye to oversleep. Then, I have to say my classmates are observant. They regard me as a brave girl. I am not shy when talking to the strangers and not nervous when giving a speech before many people. With courage, I am good at bargaining. It is my pleasure to go shopping with my friends and bargain for them. In their eyes, I am not afraid of being refused. Of course, they are right. In their view, I am humorous and bring them happiness. Actually, they said that they admire my rich imagination and being good at telling jokes. They referred that one thing is not funny, but it can become very funny through my words. In fact, I like the relaxing and happy environment. In a word, they think I am a optimistic girl.
People around us are like a mirror. From this mirror, we could know us comprehensively and be a modest person. As the saying goes, everyone is special. Maybe we are not perfect, but we can try our best to become a better man. Only by this can we be happy and popular.

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