1248602 王晨雨 第一次作业

   Everyone plays different roles in different situations before different persons. Therefore we maybe have different impressions and images in the eyes of different people. As for me, I also have many different identities in my daily life. I am a student, a child, a roommate and an adult.
   In the eyes of my parents, I will always be the child who would never grow up. They think I can never achieve anything without their help. No matter how old I am, I will always be their little daughter who needs their care and who will give them happiness. While in the eyes of my little niece, I am a totally different image, an adult, who can protect her and give her what she wants. In front of a little girl, I am no longer the child who never grows up. I have responsibility for children I need to care about. Maybe in my niece’s eyes, I am great and reliable.
   In the eyes of my teachers, I am a diligent student. They often praise me because of my hardworking. They think I am a steady and reliable girl who would do everything perfectly. However, in the eyes of my roommates and by best friends, I am such a vivid girl that sometimes I would be in a crazy state. I love *** jokes with them. Wherever I go, laugher and happiness will always follow me. They even said I have the magic to make people get out of brief and gloom.
   Although I have different images in the eyes of different people, I still think those images are all my true self. I will try my best to live, to play all the roles perfectly.

能想到用image这个词还是很好的，很多人都想不到用这个词，请继续努力啊，但是整体上来说行文表达略为简单，较为地道的书面表达有所欠缺，以人称为主语开头的句子过多，建议平时多看书积累词汇表达，多用英语进行思维。一些发现的问题，比如第一段里different使用过频， I am such a vivid girl that sometimes I would be in a crazy state. 不是很理解vivid这里作何解释，If you describe memories and descriptions as vivid, you mean that they are very clear and detailed. 没见过vivid修饰人啊。I still think those images are all my true self.这里think是低级词汇，可以尝试acknowldge，embrace等词啊。