1248604 王尘逸第一次作业

Me in others’ eyes

Most of the time I was thinking what kind of person I am in others’ eyes. The question seems to be hard to answer.
In my parents’ eyes, I am a sensible and filial daughter but occasionally will be a little rebellious. Every time my father was drunk, he always talked about these stories to show how nice a daughter I am. For example, once my father came home drunk, he was so plastered that he lay on the floor directly. It was a cold winter, I was at home alone and what’s worse I was only 5 years at that time. It is too difficult for a five-year-old girl to move an adult. Then I put a quilt on the floor, rolled my father to the center of it and covered him. I called my mom as soon as I finished it. My father was so moved after he sobering.
In my friends’ eyes, I must be an easygoing and fun-loving playmate. My friends told me that it was happy to play with me, for I always made them laugh and it was quite easy to get along with me. At the same time, I am a good listener and a good “agony aunt”. I still remember once a girl was envious of my close friends for me.
In teachers’ eyes, I never be a diligent student. Because my mom works in the department of education, my school life was full of “rough”. Every Saturday when I came back home from school, mom always prepared a table of tasty food and unpalatable talk. For my teachers told her all my stories in school, such as talking in class, eating in class or egging classmates on to play cards.
What kind of person I am in your eyes?

基本的语法和时态还不错，但文中的句子略偏口语，缺少比较地道的书面用语的表达，这个我们会在平时尽量帮助大家积累，自己方面也建议多读多记，平日多用英语思考，一个意思也要去尝试不同的表达。In my parents’ eyes, I am a sensible and filial daughter but occasionally will be a little rebellious. 如果看后面的例子话，这句话就不是很适合做主题句，因为里面的sensible和rebelliou完全没有提到。 At the same time, I am a good listener and a good “agony aunt”. I still remember once a girl was envious of my close friends for me. 这两句话之间的关系我没看明白，求解释啊！In teachers’ eyes, I never be a diligent student. Because my mom works in the department of education, my school life was full of “rough”. 这几句话之间的关系也比较混乱，需要加以解释。