1248611 张虎明 第一次作业

I always look up to the sky and imagine what kind of person I am in the eyes of other people. But I cannot come to a definite conclusion. I tranquilly see this phenomenon and recall my memory to find out diverse me in the minds of different people.
In teachers' eyes, I am a hardworking and smart boy. I could finish one new workbook of chemistry within one week. I could work out the mathematical problem of high school when I study junior high school. But there are many things that they are unaware of. Sometimes, computers and TV are all my life. In addition, I could spend all the time of my holiday on fishing. I could hurry to my homework in the evening before the semester starts. I am not the people with two sides. I just behave like chameleon when I stay in different situations in order to be safe.
As a son, I am naughty and immature kid in my parents' eyes. The "repairing electric cooker” accident, which I disassembled the fine cooker and made the whole family lose their meal, will linger on their mind all the time. But they are ignorant that their little boy has already had his own thoughts and in some ways he has become mature. He can independently deal with hardship. That is "true” me. But no matter how mature I become, the family love is one of the inseparable parts in my life.
Being a friend, I am always labeled as an introvert person. I am not good at socializing. It is often the case that when my friends are talking cheerfully, I just stand beside them and have no idea how to join in their conversations. But in my understanding, slowcoach can be a better word in describing me.
Through different eyes, I see many types of me. I think each kind is a real but incomplete me. I do not change frequently but just behave correspondently in different environments.

总体来看思路清晰，能够使用一些比较好的表达，请继续加油，问题比较明显的就是我们课上说的，以人称代词做主语的句子过多，缺少句式上的变化，另外一些个别地方也要多加注意，比如I always look up to the sky and imagine what kind of person I am，我不知道会不会真的去看天，但用个ponder肯定要比imagine要稍微好一点，I am not the people with two sides.我们也可以叫double-dealer，最后will linger on their mind all the time.这里也可以尝试haunting memory或者hovering in one's mind表示难忘。