1248716 彭彩霞 第一次作业

Me in the Eyes of Other People
What kind of person am I in the eyes of other people? Never have I thought about this question. I think it is very difficult to answer because I play different roles when getting along with different people. For example, I am a daughter of my parents and a student of my teachers. Different people observe different dispositions of mine.
In the eyes of my parents, I am a independent girl. I have lived in boarding school since I was in primary school. I can take good care of myself at that time. Although I do help my mother with household chores, my mother always complains that I am lazy at home. Besides, my mother thinks that I am a little inefficient, in that sometimes I can not finish something before her deadline. My mother always says that I am not a strong-willed person because I only stick to things for several days.
As for my teachers, they regard me as a well-behaved student. When we are in class, I will listen to what teachers say carefully. I am always finish all assignment in time. However, I seldom raise my hand during the class. One of my teacher encourages me to be confident in class.
My friends view me as a hard-working girl. They say that I always spend much of my time on study. In addition, they think I am easy to get along with except that sometimes I am in my own world. Many friends comment on me that I am always in a hurry. For instance, when we go to our classroom, I always walk faster than my roommates.
That is me in the eyes of some people. It is impossible to know all people’s opinions of me, but it is the general image of mine in other people’s eyes.

语法基础很好，但文章细节设计上比较平淡，缺少能抓住读者眼球的东西，希望今后在构思上能多下些功夫，用词方面偏于日常的表达，没能体现出书面写作上用词的一些考究，比如第一段里面反复使用了different，那使用vary等就可以避免了。"It is impossible to know all people’s opinions of me, but it is the general image of mine in other people’s eyes."这里的话我们可以用fragment对应full picture可能会好一点，建议平时多开阔下自己的视野和思路，这样写作的时候也能写出自己比较独到的一种视角。