me in the eyes of others

Generally, the image of a person in the eyes of other people is different from what in the eyes of himself or herself. So am I. when others talk about me, I feel it likes I am facing a real mirror, which reflect the true personality of myself. That’s why I would like to listen the words which others describe about me regardless of in a direct way or not.
My parents always think I am a lazy girl, especially my mom. Most of time, she is telling me the importance of being a diligent student and encouraging me to challenge the difficulties I may meet. Thanks to her definition of me, I can keep a diligent habit all the time.
One of my best friends once told me she thought I am a pessimist. Indeed, I might worry about something for a long time. So when I heard she thought me was pessimistic I decided to strip of this negative aspect in my characteristic. From then on, I began to enjoy every minute in my life. Being a optimist is not easy road for everyone, yet we can benefit from the period of maintaining a optimistic mood. Now in the eyes of other people, I am an optimistic girl.
When I study in the high school, I was a shy or introverted student. They encouraged me to develop my potential ability in other aspects and show myself. With their help, I got a great improvement during my high school years. Now I am outgoing in the eyes of other people.
In the eyes of other people, it’s impossible to be perfect. Hence everyone should accept or consider advises come from others. So we are willing to know how others comment us and give us valuable suggestions.

文章内容基本连贯，但连接词和过渡词稍欠丰富；文章能使用一些结构简单的长句，但是不能够熟练运用，还是简单句居多。结构上看比较清晰，但句与句之间的衔接还需多加思考，缺少变化，显得大多为平铺直叙；内容上有些句子之间的关系略显，支撑句与主题句欠缺呼应。一些语法错误本可以避免，如listen the words, regardless of in a direct way or not。还有一些表达方式也不是很合适，如Thanks to her definition of me, I can keep a diligent habit all the time (definition这里并不合适，倒不如直接用words,另外deligent也不能用来修饰habit)，Being a optimist is not easy road (这个表达太中式了……)，希望今后写作时多注意词汇的选择与运用，从整体上对文章能有更好的规划。