1248707王崟池第一次作业Me in the Eyes of Other People

Me in the Eyes of Other People
Time flies and I have been a college student for more than two years.So long time passed that I have known about my roommates and other friends a lot,but I still have no idea that how the other people think about me.So,I gave them this question and I concluded their answers with three words.
“Handsome” is the answer from one of my roommates.In fact,my two roommates gave me the same point which makes me a little embarrassed.The point was that the first impression I gave them was totally different from what I really was.They thought I should be gentle and shy like most girls who came from the southern part.However,as somebody said,never judge a person by the experience,I was not such girl from southern part.They thought the way I considered the problems was a little “man”. To be honest,I agreed with her and I often described myself as a cow girl.
“Otaku” is the second world could describe me.According to my friends’ descriptions,I preferred to stay at the dormitory rather than go out.Nowhere was better than home or dormitory.This was the truth.In my opinion,this was a representation of my laziness.If I could be more diligent,I might get more S.
“Calm” is another word they gave me.As far as they were concerned,I was seldom nervous,just like I could master every situation.I was surprised by this description.I was calm just because I was a little lacking in vigour.That was why I could take everything easy.As for me,as long as the sun also rises,the life would go on.
Besides,one of my roommates said she admired me because of my straight,long and black hair. That was also what I have been proud of.
What I am in the eyes of other people differs from what I think about myself.And I think I can know about myself more clearly by comparing the two ideas.

基本的语法时态掌握的还不错，但是词汇表达以及句式的多样性还是略有欠缺，请多留意，文章中使用了比较多的简单句，用词也基本属于普通的四级词汇，建议今后增加阅读，多积累词汇和好的表达方式。"the first impression I gave them"其实是汉语式的英语，正常的搭配是the first impression I leave on/upon them. 另外"They thought I should be gentle and shy like most girls who came from the southern part." 这里用as... as...是不是好些呢，后面的定语从句也可以换成普通的定语a typical Chiang-nan girl.最后"“Calm” is another word they gave me"，其实除了give，我们课上讲的label，associate..with...就要更生动些。