1248708程璐第一次作业

Me in The Eyes of Other People
“Snow White is a princess living with her stepmother, a vain and wicked Queen. The Queen fears that Snow White's beauty surpasses her own, so she forces Snow White to work as a scullery maid and asks her Magic Mirror daily "who is the fairest one of all”. For several years the mirror always answered that the Queen was, pleasing her. ”
This is the classic plot extracted from the Brothers Grimm fairy tales. Like the Queen in the story cared about her goodliness ,most people,includes me, care about the question——what do other people regard me as.
I asked my friends to label me for this purpose. My roommates told me , “you are a mild girl. However, you are weak and easily bullied sometimes. We need to keep an eye on you when we shopping together.” But,my superior in my campus organization said that my thinking remained acute and my character forceful. Besides,she had worried that I can not get along well with my colleagues .
These two kinds of answer are different as black and white. That confused me . I puzzled over the reason led to this situation. Meanwhile, I am anxious about that would misdirect few people to consider I have two faces.
I told my misgivings to my best friend totally. But she thought it is not a mater of great concern. She said,if my disposition could be fair used , I will be a kind girl with a sense of responsibility.
I know how to treat the judgment from others eventually. There is nothing to fear. That is a mirror which can help me step forward and get better.

开篇的小故事还是挺好的，但是因为这个故事很多人都比较熟悉，所以前面可以没有必要浪费太多的墨水，可以直接引用原文那句"Mirror, mirror on the wall, who's the fairest one of all?"然后直接说Like the queen in Snowwhite...， 这样就更自然了。虽然我们课上讲了可以用label这个词，I asked my friends to label me for this purpose还是有点误用这个词了，直接加人的话是另外一个意思，比如I can't bear people who make judgements and label me.我讨厌人们对我品头论足。我们一般会用I was labeled bookworm.或者He had the label as housewife.这种表达。

嗯，谢谢老师。把文章开头修改后，作文字数肯定减少好多，就不满足作文要求了。老师觉得文章的哪一部分还描述的不够完善可以再充实一些的吗？我自已就觉得结尾段有些简短，有点怪怪的，但是我又不知道应该再总结些什么了。