药学2班 卫雯婕1248514 第一次作业

Me in The Eyes of Others

“Which kind of person am I?”is an interesting question that has been studied in by many thinkers in the long history of mankind.Actually, not only thinkers but also ordinary people admit that self-recognition plays an import role in the way of our life,which helps us to realize strengths and weakness and guide us to become a better person. Just as an old Chinese saying said；Standers-by see more than gamesters.In my opinion,the true self lies in the eyes of others.
In the eyes of my parents,family means so much for me.I call them everyday in college,telling my life and study and also knowing what is going on with them.They’re gratified that I am always doing much housework as growing up.I’m filial in that regard.Unfortunately,being the only child of my family,I’m a little spoiled.Whenever anything against my willing happens,I always quarrel with them to express my discontent immediately.From the depth of their hearts,they hope I could be considerate of the care and thought.In the eyes of my friends,generally,I am a quiet girl especially facing strangers.But the more I know someone,the more chatty I will be.Besides,I often have a serious attitude towards everything I take up in and spare no effort lest regret later.They do hope I can accept no one can be perfect and just try my best.In the eyes of my little sister,I’m an extremely talented people------I know everything she doesn’t know.Every time she comes to me with questions,I could always come up with a convincing answer.My versatility fills her with admiration.I can play ping-pong,badminton and chess.I play Rubik cube very well and cook a lovely meal.I’m so perfect in her mind except my bed temper------I tend to become impatient when she doesn’t get at such things that are easy for me.
Although different people say different thing about myself,I do admit that from the eyes of others,I re-recognize a more comprehensive,objective and real self,which inspires me to strive for a better daughter,student and real man.So,why don’t you try to acquaint yourself by the eyes of others now?

语言能力还是不错的，但一些搭配可能记得不是很扎实，比如family means so much for me，这里的for应该换成to，而anything against my willing，这里的willing应该是will 或者用didn't get my wish这个表达。Besides,I often have a serious attitude towards everything I take up in and spare no effort lest regret later.这个地方转换的有些过快，并没有起到一个承接的作用，请再考虑一下。结尾的总结很棒！

采用三段式，过渡顺畅。 但in my family's eyes 那节，读着读着会让读者有种这好像是你对自己的看法。这节句子多，节数长，是不是考虑多用第三人称暗示读者，便于他们区分这是家人对自己的观点。结尾以一反问句结束，构思新颖而独特。整体上是篇不错的文章。