1248617 杨玉琳 第一次作业

 After talking with roommates about what kind of person I am in their eyes, I can presumably get a general impression.
 The first impression they both have mentioned is enthusiasm. Because when I first day came to CPU I warmly greeted with them and actively expressed my view on this new environment, which seemed that we had been known for years. Frankly speaking, at that time I was so nervous that l can just talk constantly to relive this embarrassed atmosphere.
 Gradually, we became far more familiar with each other. And my friend Yogurt also find I am a totally forgetful girl. The question I ask others most time is ”Where is my..., have you seen it?” And without my roommates’ reminds, I must have missed so many vital lessons. I can’t imagine how I can live well only by myself.
 However, nothing will be always bad. They also find I can catch the point at the crucial moment. Maybe I can comfort myself that I am just careless about the trivial matters. When my friend suddenly suffers from the acute disease, I can immediately become into a commander to command what we will do in case the condition becomes worse. And I hate hesitating much to make a decision, so they all feel I am a decisive girl.
 Nevertheless, decisiveness doesn’t means I can always make a good determination. To some extent, it can be called ”impulse”. Shopping is the most typical example. I often regret buying many beautiful but useless things. My friends must be impressed much by this. Thus, now I usually tell myself I should thick thrice before acting, which can make me avoid much trouble.
 That is me. An enthusiastic, decisive but forgetful and impulsive girl. They said because I have big eyes with sharp expression, they first thought I was a person difficult to get along with. But after acquaintance, they said I am just a silly girl. That’s so funny that I still cannot admit now !

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