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Me in The Eyes of Other People
  After I asked my several friends what kind of person I am in their minds, to my surprise, each of them gives me an almost different answer. But that also makes sense. Different surroundings will lead people to show different dispositions.
  In the eyes of most of my schoolmates, the most typical feature of me is carelessness. I always lost my belongings and even my friend’s belongings in my pocket can not be an exception such as my roommate’s money and school ID card. From the first day I came to CPU to today, I have changed four school ID cards and one metro card. It has no possible to find them back because I thoroughly forget where I have put them. Therefore, my friends will demand me to put all my valuables in their bags when we go shopping. But for some of my friends who I made in travel, in their eyes, I am a very cautious and careful girl. I will make clear and considerate plan for travel and pay attention to personal safety when I visit a strange city for the first time.
  “ You are an inverted girl and gives me a feeling that you are not interested in everything.” one of my friend comments on me. She also gives me one example. If I have lunch in dining hall and eat something delicious, I will share nothing but one word that the food is excellent with my friends. However, if Cindy faces the same thing, she will rush to dorm and describe the food to everyone even take them to dining hall to taste it immediately. But my parents always regard me as a girl who never stops talking. Everytime I go back home, I have numerous words say to them with no stop.
  I am wondering why I am a different girl in different persons’ eyes. In my opinion, we play diverse roles in different situations. When we face our friends, we are a sincere companion. And facing our parents, we are only a little child. But when we are alone, we will be strong enough in order to protect ourselves.

语言运用基本功不错，没有大的语法时态的问题，一些小地方请多加留意。It has no possible to find them back because I thoroughly forget where I have put them.前面应该是impossible或者very unlikely，后面也可以试试rack one' brain的表达，比如我们可以说Bob racked his brains trying to remember where he left the book.第三段后面还是有些问题的， But my parents always regard me as a girl who never stops talking. Everytime I go back home, I have numerous words say to them with no stop. 这里我觉得talktive和not interested in everything并不矛盾，相反应该是讲对哪些事情你会展现出enthusiasm或to do it with unrestrained zest.
最后I am wondering why I am a different girl in different persons’ eyes. 可以试试different images reflected/projected in the eyes of ...

文章思路很清晰，语言连贯。It has no possible to find them back 用 possibility换掉possible Everytime I go back home, I have numerous words say to them with no stop.可以写些你喜欢谈论的东西