1248714 古雪杰 第一次作业

        In my 19 years of life,I have heard various perspectives on my personality of other people.My family think that I am always like a little girl with a simple mind. In the eyes of my friends,”lazy pig” may be the best definition of me. And a nodding acquaintance feels that I am as noisy as a bird,for my lips are never buttoned.Although there are different mes in different people’s eyes,their evaluations have one thing in common----hopelessly goofy.The reasons why people think like that are as follows.
        Firstly,my iconic smirk makes a great contribution to it.It seems that those similes show on my face all the time. How silly it is !This is what exactly in their mind when people see me. Actually,I giggle just because some interesting plots or ideas hit me. It is my superficial or odd views on normal trifles that do much on my foolishness.When an events comes up,the first thought occurs to me must be the simple one. I seems to be too innocent to see clearly the complex society. What’s more,in the eyes of others,so honest am I that many times people manage to take advantage of me. As a matter of fact,inarticulate and lazy to explain,I always try to avoid being in conflicts with others. For instance,if someone misunderstands me because of a little thing,I will listen to her/his complaint patiently and apologize to her/him in stead of quarreling with her/him.It may look like I am wronged and coward,but the troubles get out of my way in fact.
        To be honest,I have no idea whether this character is beneficial. However,I indeed lead a happy life. Naive and stupid as I am,my heart feels peaceful and comfortable after one-day experience. I make up my mind to be myself in this way,no matter how people estimate me.

词汇和句式的使用还是不错的，有些我觉得非常好，比如make a great contribution to这样的表达。就几个地方稍微说一下I am always like a little girl with a simple mind，这里能用形容词就不要有介词短语了，会显得有些拖沓。最大的问题是body paragraph（第二段）的逻辑有些混乱，有些地方前后衔接不上，尤其是从中间往后，请在好好考虑下，将这部分重新调整下。