1248603 秦凯 第一次作业

                                 
  alone, once I lied on the lawn with two legs crossed, looked at the blue sky ，and sank into deep thoughts, who was I and what did I behave in the eyes of other people ,it troubled me a lot. But with time goes by, I think I find the answer.
     Shy and rational, it is the general definition I introduce myself when asked to give a self-introduction. As a science student, sometimes I have to admit I am much less emotional than others, maybe it is due to the common characteristic of science students, or it depends on my environment where I was born. I think everyone has his own unique character, if all are same, then the world will not be colorful.
      But when it comes to others, I get some original information. Outgoing, but sometimes I am erratic, one of my good friend tells me. Why it should be that? I ask myself, it occurs to me that if I am happy, I can wave my hands all day but when I am sad, I could be very silent and not talk to anyone unless asked. Maybe that is why I make them feel unhappy unconsciously and let them think I am erratic. It is high time that I should make a change. Before *** a decision, I am supposed to take the transpositonal consideration.
     Thanks to this experience, I can find my weakness, and I can be a better myself.[size=13][/size]

对比的思路还是很好的，但是有点没对到点子上，前面如果是说shy后面是outgoing倒还有对比，但前面貌似更多是在讲rational，这样前后就不是很对应了，如果前面不变后面讲讲感性的方面也可以。另外理性表现在什么方面，再加以解释下，举个具体的例子会更好。另外比较大的问题是，比较多的句子都是用逗号连接，这还是很严重的问题，请在句法上多下功夫。But when it comes to others, I get some original information. 这句话我没看懂，求解释。

其实那句话，I am trying to say,当这个问题碰到其他人的时候，我就收到了新颖的答复，表达应该是太Chinglish话了，不过看完大家的，发现自己写的，用语文老师经常说我的那句，你又跑题了。。。

哦，那我们可以试试When it comes to my image in the eyes of other people, their descriptions seem to be the direct opposite of mine. 这样就可以前后对比了，