1148317 袁一萍 第一次作业 Me in the Eyes of Other People

Looking in the mirror, I often wonder what kind of person I am in the eyes of other people. Some said that I’m outgoing and easygoing, while other regarded me as a cold fish. I use different attitude to different people by nature, but I have no idea of how they will judge me in response. To get a better understanding of myself, I did a simple oral survey to some of my friends and relatives. Here comes the results.
Some friends told me that I’m a warm-hearted and easygoing girl. As a friend, I’m definitely eligible. When chatting with friends, I get used to listen to each of them carefully, give them advices in suitable time, and sometimes show my smile to express my agreement. If the topic happens to be interesting, I will even “deliver” a funny speech which often make them burst into laughter. Honestly, I treat all my friends sincerely. Their happiness makes me feel happy, their sadness makes me want to cry with them. But I’m not anyone of them, so I cannot totally understand their feelings, I just wish that time could stop when they are delighted while time could fly quickly when they are sad. There are also some other friends called me “cold fish”. They blamed for my rejection to share my secrets with them. I have to admit that’s really my fault to hide my secrets to them and I’m sorry for that, but it doesn’t mean I don’t love them. Careful listening and secrets keeping are easy for me, but I just can’t get used to share my own secrets with anyone except my family.
As for my family members, I’m always a child. They told me that they know that I’ve already grown up and they know that I can take care of my mum and myself now, but they prefer to regard me as kid who will always need protection and care. Because deep in their memories, what impressed them most are still those childish things I’ve ever done. When 3-year-old, I played with ants in my back yard for the whole afternoon and refused to have dinner until my mum spanked me. When age of 7, I followed a little stranger girl to her home just for her duck toy, my whole big family had searched me for 10 hours in that day. When 14, I sought for my aunt’s help to chase a boy, because I thought that he would not like me after saw me getting into boys’ toilet by accident. After that time, I got used to share secrets with my family. Now I still do that so, because I know that they will accept the whole me without any condition. Whether I behave good or not, whether I talked friendly or not, and whether my character is lazy or not, my family will always love me and stand by me.
That’s me in the eyes of other people. Every one of me is different, and every one of me is same. Hope you will like me.

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没关系，不影响阅读。总体上来说行文比较通顺流畅，句式有所变化，但用词表达略为简单，缺少能抓住读者眼球的东西，可以适当加入一些修辞，还是建议平时多积累下。有些地方稍微注意一下，比如Some friends told me that I’m a warm-hearted and easygoing girl.后面讲的事可能算是easygoing，但是没有体现出warm-hearted，所以前后并不对应。that’s really my fault to hide my secrets to them 这里hide的搭配是hide sth/sb from sb，例如He was accused of trying to hide evidence from the police. 最后 When age of 7，应该是at the age of ……