肥龙第一次作业。。。。。。。。。。。。

Monster From GuanDong
Frankenstein will be the most suitable label if it stick on me because I am an eccentric in others’ eyes.
Almost no one can realize that I am a Cantonese if I do not say a word. In one of my teachers’ class, “Most of Cantonese have a thinner body because the tenperature in GuanDong is high and people live in it will lose more water that others, so, are there any Cantonese?” After I raising my hand, “You are Cantonese?” After I speaking a word, “Oh, he is native.” It was so cruel.
And almost no one believe that I am a native Cantonese after the first winter. In another teacher’s class, the tenperature was below zero.
I was late. “Why you are late?” “Because I hibernated.” I anwsered. “But it seems that you only weared a pair of pants. Do you feel cold now?” I just shaked my head. “You are the most eccentric Cantonese I have met. My goodness, just a piece of cloth!” It was just cool that day.
As a Cantonese, I am very happy. Just like a foreigner, a foreign air blusts out from me. Many classmates say that I am very interesting because of my standard Cantonese accent. It seems that I have learned more foreign language. However, sometime it makes me awkward just like “What is he talking about? Is he come from Mars?” It is not very funny to be an alien.
For me, game is indispensable in my life. Most of my classmates and teachers know that I love playing computer games. My roomates know I will spend all of my leisure playing games. No matter where and no matter when I will bring a game machine with me. This fever of game makes me more strange, it creats an illusion that I am an alien form game star. Sometime I forgot to sleep, sometime I forgot to eat. Many friends declare their bewilderment of how I surviced. And many teachers wander how I pass the exam. I can only sleep five hours and have lunch each day. To everyone’s surprised, I will not get sleepy in any class. I can get fatter only absorb energy from one meal. Thus, they call me the man who can get fatter by only drinking water. For me, I just want to say it is game give me thie power. Recently, I found a sentence which can summarize my whole life accuratly, it calls NO GAME NO LIFE.
One of my friends asked me a question one day, if I am schizophrenic.
Maybe he is ture. Sometime I feel puzzled because I would lost a whole day’s memory. I can not recall anything about a day which I have spent with him and he has a very strong memory. What’s more, he told me that sometimes I had got angry for unknown reason. He said I was like a stupid. And he is ture.
If I act foolishly one day, do not be surprised, for most of my acquaintance know I am an eccentric.

语言能力和思想还是很好的，stereotype一直是比较有意思的一个切入点，比较喜欢alien这个表达，不足之处在于段落之间和内部的连贯，有些地方跳跃显得比较突然，一些小的拼写错误和语法错误也请多留意，比如tenperature，Is he come from Mars， To everyone’s surprised等等，另外“Almost no one can realize that I am a Cantonese if I do not say a word.”可以把realize换成tell试试，后面的if…可以采用before I open my mouth的表达，get sleepy，get fatter这里面的get属于比较口语化的表达，比如困我们还可以说drowsiness began to steal upon the eyelids of ……，变胖可以用put on weight，总体上还是不错的，请继续加油！