1248615 吕文琦 第一次作业

Me in the eyes of other people
When you first meet me, you might think the girl seems to be a little difficult to get along with. In fact, it is not true.
The people having been my friends for long time like to talk anything with me and ask me for help, because they know I will not refuse them and try my best to help them. I can always get satisfaction when problems are solved. From they first meet me to they are familiar with me, they can feel obviously that I am just like two different people. The more they get on with me, the more laughter they will listen from me. It seems that I can burst into laughter without any reasons. Besides laugh, I like taking exercise especially. Only if the time permitted, I would do exercise one hour every day. Therefore, people around me think I am quite healthy. The result of exercising is that people will look more energetic and passionate. All these characters are only shown before people who are willing to make friends with me. As for the people who do not like me from the begin, I am always indifferent.
Different people have different views. Therefore, I have different characters in the eyes of other people. But in the eyes of people who have known me for long time, there is only one me in their heart.

开了个好头，可惜后面写的有点散了。开篇写自己看上去好像难以相处，实际上却是相反的，后面应该写为什么别人的第一印象是这样呢？然后写自己在真正的朋友相处中的表现，这样才是前后呼应的。另外句子相对来说有些口语化，词汇和复杂句式的使用还有待提高，请继续努力。最后说几个表达上可以改进的地方，ask for help可以试试turn to sb. for help这个短语，try my best可以试试endeavor， “The more they get on with me, the more laughter they will listen from me.”，可以试试grow to like me more the better they know me。