1248619 余歌 第一次作业

Me in the Eyes of Other People
I always wonder what kind of person I am in the eyes of other people. My figures in other people’s eyes are very important to me. Because of different connections to the others in the society, we play various roles in our lives.
It is obvious that to my parents, I’m always a little girl who needs their love and care, although I have grown into completely an adult now. My father often said it is only when I marry a man and have my own baby that he can let me go as an adult.
I have a true friend who has know me all my life. We grew up together. In her eyes, I’m a good playmate, a patient listener and adviser. Most of the spare days in my childhood was passed in a happy time hanging out with her. She shares her happiness and trouble with me. Now she has her own campus in Zhengjiang. I can still remember she wrote in the letter for my 12th birthday that she was thankful to me for keeping accompany with her during her childhood and puberty and preventing her from loneliness.
Science my uncle and aunt were busy with their business career, my cousin who is only 10 years old lives with my parents and I. I’m more like a protector and guider to him than an older sister. I began to teacher him some simple English words like “bird” and “dog” and to take him to the swimming pool every week in summer vocation when he was in the kindergarden. In the weekend, I would like take him to the places I have scouted such as a garden with a small whirligig or a tidy pet market.
In fact, no matter what kind of a person I seem to be in the eyes of other people, I just hope that I can manage to bring them happiness and trust.

能够想到一些复杂句式，但口语化的句子也有，请务必注意口语和书面语的选择。前面两个例子非常不错，相比之下最后一个有点弱了，如果修改的话，完全可以只用第一个父母宠爱的故事或者第二个和朋友之间友情的故事，但需要更深入具体描写，比如父母平日的一些做法，或者自己遇到事情父母的反应等等。最后说一点关于语法和表达方面的，句法还可以，但词汇和时态以及主谓一致上的问题还是存在的，今后要多加努力，“My figures in other people’s eyes”，这里面figure应该换成image，我们经常说的“发小”，简单来说就是childhood friend。