1248704 赵新月 第一次作业

Me in the eyes of other people
When I saw this topic, I put it on my WeChat, one of the most common social media immediately. Three days later, I received different comments which can be briefly considered as three types.
Some people l met only one or two times think I am a taciturn girl. Only if I need to talk during a party or meeting, I will never start a conversation first.
A lot of friends from my junior and senior high school consider me as an easy-going and talkative classmate. The pressure of entering a university made me love to talk to anyone in my class to release my anxiety. However, when my friends needed help, it was I who always give them a hand to help them get out of trouble.
A few friends, known as my girlfriends, sometimes call me lunatic. I often come up with some crazy ideas or describe some fantasy beyond their imagination. They will say “Please shut up” when they cannot catch up my mind. Then I have to become quiet for 3 seconds and change another topic to share.
In other words, I have different characteristics in different groups of people, though these are all aspects of me. I am so distinctive that no one can imitate. This is me, I hope everyone can accept it.

句式很丰富，语言运用的基本功还是不错的，几个小地方稍微说一下，“can be briefly considered as three types”, 应该是classified into吧，“The pressure of entering a university made me love to talk to anyone in my class to release my anxiety.”这句话的因果关系我没太理解，为什么会出现这种情况呢？另外就是ease可能比release合适一点吧。最后转换话题change another topic to share，可以用switch，会比change显得地道些。

Admin 写道:句式很丰富，语言运用的基本功还是不错的，几个小地方稍微说一下，“can be briefly considered as three types”, 应该是classified into吧，“The pressure of entering a university made me love to talk to anyone in my class to release my anxiety.”这句话的因果关系我没太理解，为什么会出现这种情况呢？另外就是ease可能比release合适一点吧。最后转换话题change another topic to share，可以用switch，会比change显得地道些。

感谢老师的回复！几点建议都会改正~
The pressure of entering a university made me love to talk to anyone in my class to release my anxiety. 我想表达的意思就是 前面说到talktive，就解释一下为什么会变得talktive 是因为高考的压力所以才会很想找人说话 通过与同学的沟通去缓解压力 可惜表达能力不够以至于整个句子怪怪的。。