Me in the eye of others

Me in the eye of others 0847916 李昕
I wish I could be the apple of everyone's eyes.But the fact always disapoints me.I suppose that nobody can satisfy all the people around for the sake of everyone's imperfection.I am curious to know what my image looks like in the others' mind.Nonetheless,I can't ask them directly for fear that I'm flattered.You know,people do not always tell the truth in case to annoy others.Supposing others ask the same question to me, I would omit the unpleasant adjectives and select the delightful ones.
In oder to approach the truth, I decide to investigate my parents ,intimates and acquaintances by personality test .And my questionnaire is as following.
One day, you met an animal which can speak human language, you wish be... that'll be. A. Sheep B. Horse C. Rabbit D. Bird2. On an isolated island, you can only have an animal as you companion, which one you'll choose... A. Human B. Pig C. Cow D. Bird3. If you have the super power to tame all kinds of animal, you'll choose what kind of animal to be your pet? A. Dinosaur B. White Tiger C. Polar Bear D. Leopard... ...
I ask my acquaintances to choose the answer I would probably choose.I check the answer to choice and collect all the results.By analyzing the results ,I came to a conclusion and find a totally different myself.
Unlike my self-judgement ,I am independent and unconventional　unfletted in their mind,demanding a free and unattached life for myself that allows me to determine my own course.However ,I always think that I'm carefree and a bit of childish.To be continued, I have an artistic bend in my work or leisure activities. My urge for freedom sometimes causes me to do exactly the opposite of what expected of me.Moreover,my lifestyle is highly individualistic. I would never blindly imitate what is "in"; on the contrary, I seek to live according to my own ideas and convictions, even if this means swimming against the tide.Meanwhile,sometimes I'm an impulsive person for the so called passion.
Out of my imagination,I get my brand new description.I change myself unwittingly by a series of things,finally,get the mature character instead of that carefree girl.
Thanks to this questionnaire ,I know where I am and where I should go to.

文章内容基本连贯，文章能使用一些比较好的长句机构和学术词汇，但连接词和过渡词稍欠丰富。内容上看，后半部分逻辑和整体结构略显混乱，另外测试本身和别人对你的看法似乎并无太大联系，而且这种测试本身所得出的结论也值得推敲，即使有科学依据，测试的内容也未必读者所关心的，有凑字数的嫌疑 语法和词汇方面也有些问题，比如in case to, as following, I decided to investigate my parents, 没必要大义灭亲吧…… 最后需要注意的时态的使用和一些中式英语的用法，如unpleasant adjectives and select the delightful ones, check the answer to choice, live according to my own ideas and convictions。希望以后写作时可以先进行整体设计规划。