Me in the Eyes of Other people1048203 高思婕

Just as there are one thousand Hamlets in the eyes of one thousand people, I believe different people that are acquainted with me also have different impressions of me．Thus when it comes to me in the eyes of other people, I can not know exactly but just a little roughly.
To my relief and gratification, I am undoubtedly the most well-behaved child in my beloved parents’ eyes, though this kind of opinion is widely held by parents who love their own children deeply. To be honest, a little willful as me due to my parents’ pampering, I am really a worthy child of them who never takes their love for granted but always cherish the happy and satisfactory life we are leading in my parents’eyes. Meanwhile，my parents are sensible enough to realize my shortcomings such as my incredibly strong fear and hatred for animals that don’t live in the sea or river, which leads to my being particular about food．
As for many of my teachers, I am qualified to be condidered as a good student in their eyes. My pride always drives me not to lag behind others. My self-discipline usually makes them feel relieved although I don’t always abide by various regulations in school. In addition, my teachers trust me. They believe that I will spare no effort to live up to their expectations wben they give me some precious opportunities and honors.
In my good friends’ eyes, I am a person controled by my emotion. In another words, I am not rational. Besides, they regard me as a romantic person because I will spend every possible festival as I can, however small it is, and I will remember special days for my parents and my friends and give them a little surprise on those days. As my good friends, there is no doubt that they know that I am picky about food and particular about the so-called atmosphere.
I couldn’t describe me in the eyes of other people in detail due to the limit of my understanding. There are still many other people who have different impressions of me. Maybe one day later I will know more clearly about me in the eyes of other people.

文章结构清晰，内容明确，词汇和复杂句使用不错，句法规范；但行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用，请继续努力。一些具体的表达错误如下，Thus when it comes to me in the eyes of other people, I can not know exactly but just a little roughly. (感觉比较明显从中文翻译过来的)，a little willful as me (as I am)，my parents are sensible enough to realize my shortcomings such as my incredibly strong fear and hatred for animals that don't live in the sea or river, which leads to my being particular about food(这句表达有点混乱，逻辑上似乎也有点问题，英汉两种语言在表达上句子中心会有所不同，请多加考虑)，condidered as a good student in their eyes (去掉as和in their eyes)，My self-discipline usually makes them feel relieved (额，为什么是relieved呢？ )，they give me some precious opportunities and honors (这里的表达也有点问题，opportunities倒还可以，honors并不是很搭)，I am a person controled by my emotion. (impulsive, reckless?)。