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Me in the Eyes of Other People
Life like TV series, different people play different roles,but in our own life, we are playing different roles, students,friends, children and so on. So, in different people's eyes, we are different.
In the parents' eyes, I'm a talktive girl. Before I went to college, every day, when I came back home, I would talk to my parents what happened in that day,or my opinion of some social topics. So, as long as I stay with my parents, I have a lot to talk to them. And also, I'm very filial. I love my parents, so whatever my parents say, I will try my best to achieve, I do not want make them disappointed.But sometime, I was self-willed, I do not listen them carefully, I have my own plan and opinion, I'm too treasonous to do as what they say.
In the teachers' eyes, I finish my work quickly, treat everything scrupulous and seriously , and take part in all kinds of activities actively. They trust me, they thought I have responsibility to my work, I hardworking, I devoted myself to all of my course.But the different is, I always feel nervous when I talk to my teachers, I do not like make a statement during the class, so in my teachers' eyes, I am a bashfulness girl.
In my friends' eyes, I am a optimistic, sunshine, natural,unmannered girl.I give my heart to our friendship, do not cheat them.And no matter what happened, I will try my best to smile,I think nothing is cannot be solved.At the same time, I am a good listener, my friends like to talk with me when they meet some unhappy things, I will help them to find the way to solve those problem,and also I will keep the secret for them.
But if I meet strangers, I am quiet, I will not talk to them too much until we become good friends.So my friends often say that, I have the split personality, and in strangers' eyes, I am a little arrogant and indifferent.
That is me, who have a lot of characters in different people's eyes. But that is me, a true me.

文章比较扣题，词汇使用也比较恰当，但学术词汇和从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误。另外就是一些表达偏口语化，短句比较多，行文略显平淡，需注意文章整体的组织结构，请继续努力！一些具体的错误如下，talktive (拼写错误 talkative)，I would talk to my parents what happened in that day, or my opinion of some social topics. (前面是talkative后面就可以不用talk以避免重复，可以试试nag，后半句可以改为exchange views on some current affairs.) I love my parents, so whatever my parents say, I will try my best to achieve, I do not want make them disappointed. (口语化了点，Love for my parents drives me to spare no effort to live up to their expectations.)，In the teachers' eyes, I finish my work quickly, treat everything scrupulous and seriously , and take part in all kinds of activities actively. (比较直接和中式，请再考虑一下怎么组织语言)，I do not like make a statement (这个表达有问题，你是想说在课上发言吗？)，a optimistic (注意冠词，an optimistic)，So my friends often say that, I have the split personality, and in strangers' eyes, I am a little arrogant and indifferent. (这句话和上一句并没有明显的因果联系，split personality是你自己直译的吧，可以是a person has double character，但和上面的不爱说话没什么必然联系)。