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帖子  fisher_zy 周日 三月 16, 2014 11:55 am

My Hometown
    Chongqing is not only the city where I was born, but the only place I've never been able to leave. About 3 years ago, I moved from here to another city to begin my college life. The day I left her I felt like a fish out of water.
    Chongqing is famous for 3 characters: the delicious food, the beautiful women and the picturesque scenery.
    Hot pot is signature dishes. In winter, even the hottest summer of China, a small group of relatives and friends sit around the table, and drink the local beer-Shancheng Beer with laughing and talking. Noting is more pleasant than it. Due to the beauty of women who are absolutely a scenery line of the city, her people are so interested in shopping. They get used to see thousands of small stores and markets on the bustling streets. Of course, there is nothing more joyful to busy people than to be in nature to appreciate the beauty of her. Chongqing has three other special names: Mountain City, Bridge City and Fog City. She lies on the intersection of Yangtze River and Jialing River. With mountains and rivers around, seems people are just in heaven, especially in heavy fog winter. Rambling on the bridges, and listening to the surging sound of river, people will be completely relaxed and happy.
    I love her deeply. I love a kind of incomparable beauty of this city. Maybe someday I will have to leave her, but no matter where I would go I will never forget this city, her warm people, her colorful nights and her everything. Yes, everything that she gave me could be given by other places, but my love won’t be changed, because she is my hometown, and I will belong to her forever.

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帖子  Admin 周五 三月 21, 2014 1:12 pm

前面还可以说,I had the luxury of being born and brought up in this charming city.中间Noting is more pleasant than it 有点太中式英语了吧,Chongqing is famous for 3 characters: the delicious food, the beautiful women and the picturesque scenery.后面应该也是对应的三点啊。

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帖子  fisher_zy 周五 三月 21, 2014 6:21 pm

Admin 写道:前面还可以说,I had the luxury of being born and brought up in this charming city.中间Noting is more pleasant than it 有点太中式英语了吧,Chongqing is famous for 3 characters: the delicious food, the beautiful women and the picturesque scenery.后面应该也是对应的三点啊。
下面就简单,笼统的说了一下这三点的,有hot pot啊,美女逛街啊,欣赏美丽的雾景啊。

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帖子  Admin 周六 三月 22, 2014 9:58 am

因为只有一句Due to the beauty of women 没有把这个作为一个主题,应该是去描写重庆女性的美,你觉得呢,我见过这样描写的还是挺好玩的The reputation for beautiful women is a frequent topic of conversation in China, and it provides us with a starting point to plan our "sightseeing". 还有Unsurprisingly, Chongqing, proving that the palate for la meizi (辣妹子) remains strong. In case you're not familiar with the immense, fragrant beauty of Sichuan women, take a look at some of the irresistable qualities you're missing.

From ChinaHush:
"Chongqin girls have delicate and white skin and they do not seem to like the heavy make-up. Whether she is a working class, or a school girl, they are mostly light on the make-ups, but the natural beauty is truly amazing. Chengdu girls are like the city, vaguely reveals a faint, lazy, leisure scent. Their beauty is like a soft kitten."

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帖子  fisher_zy 周六 三月 22, 2014 10:19 am

哈哈,确实是哈, Smile 我大重庆美女的优良特点被我忽略叻!我对她们表示抱歉。

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