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帖子  Emily 小叶子 周一 三月 10, 2014 4:13 pm

Independence Day
The president: In less than an hour, aircraft from here will join others from around the world.
And you will be launching the largest aerial battle in the history of mankind.
Mankind.
That word should have new meaning for all of us today
We can't be consumed by our petty differences any more.
We will be united in our common interest.
Perhaps it's fate that today is the Fourth of July.
And you will once again be fighting for our freedom.
Not from tyranny, *** or persecution,
but from annihilation.
We're fighting for our right to live.
To exist.
And should we win the day,
the Fourth of July will no longer be known as an American holiday,
but as the day when the word declared in one voice.
We will not go quietly into the night!
We will not vanish without a fight!
We’re going to live on!
We’re going to survive!
Today, we celebrate our Independence Day.
comments: 在全人类联合起来即将对侵略地球的外星人发起总进攻时, 美国总统发表了这篇演讲。由于外星人的进攻,地球受到重创,许多人失去亲人失
去了亲朋好友,人们已从最初对外星人的好奇、欢迎,转变为愤恨。全世界人们放下了彼此间的一些仇恨,团结起来,共同保卫地球。这篇演讲大多用短句或仅仅是简单的一个词,读起来短促,有力,达到振奋人心的效果。本篇大部分用“we” 将自己与众多战士联系在一起,将全人类联系在一起,号召大家共同斗争。该演讲还用了尾韵、排比等修辞,增强气势。

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帖子  Admin 周三 三月 12, 2014 5:57 pm

分析的是对的,其实好多演讲都采用了相同的技巧,很多国外的公益广告或者警示语也比较喜欢用we。

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